Poetry Challenge Day 2

Day 2 was a bit more personal. The challenge? Write a five line poem to the last person you texted. I had just texted out a Bible verse to a group of out-of-state friends of mine, most of which I had seen very recently, so this is addressed to all of them as a whole. The line “brotherly love the stronger” actually refers to a song from the Spirit soundtrack, “Brothers Under the Sun”, which one of my best friends and I used to play when we missed each other.

We are so close at heart
But so many miles apart.
In separation love grows fonder,
Brotherly love the stronger,
Must we be apart much longer?

Once again, criticism of any kind is much appreciated!

-Rattler

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